The ultimate guide to A/B testing SaaS copy 2025

Good SaaS copy isn’t just about sounding, well, good; it needs to get results.

But how do you know if your copy is actually doing its job?

You test it.

A/B testing (or split testing) takes the guesswork out of writing high-converting SaaS copy. Instead of relying on gut feelings, you use real data to see what makes users click, sign up, or buy.

But here’s the catch: not all A/B tests are worth running.

If you’re testing random things without a clear strategy, you’ll waste time and get misleading results

In this article, I’ll break down how to A/B test your SaaS copy so you can optimize every word for conversions, plus show you some examples of copy I’ve written myself.

So, what is A/B testing copy exactly?

A/B testing is actually pretty simple:

  1. You create two versions of the same page, email, or ad. Each with a small difference (Version A vs. Version B).

  2. You split your traffic between them.

  3. You measure which one gets more conversions, that could be a KPI like sign-ups, clicks, or purchases.

  4. The winning version stays, and you keep optimizing from there.

This means constantly refining your website, landing pages, and emails for SaaS to remove friction and drive more conversions.

And why should you bother with A/B testing SaaS copy?

Because tiny tweaks can make huge differences.

  • Changing just a few words in a CTA can increase click-through rates by 90% (HubSpot).

  • Using customer testimonials on landing pages can boost conversions by 34% (BigCommerce).

  • Personalizing copy based on user behavior has been shown to lift conversions by 202% (Segment).

If you’re not testing, you’re guessing. And in SaaS, guessing is expensive.

What SaaS copy elements should you A/B Test?

Okay so the great thing is that not every part of your SaaS website or marketing funnel needs testing. Some things (like clarity and readability) should always be optimized upfront. But when you’re looking to dial up your copy for higher conversions, here’s what to focus on:

1. Headlines & subheadings

Your headline is your first impression. If it doesn’t hook visitors, they won’t read the rest of your page. Test:

Benefit-driven vs. feature-driven

  • “Automate Your Workflows & Save 10+ Hours a Week” (benefit)

  • “AI-Powered Workflow Automation” (feature)

Question vs. statement

  • “Struggling to Manage Your Team? Try This.”

  • “Seamless Team Management Starts Here.”

Adding urgency or exclusivity

  • “Limited Spots for Our Beta—Sign Up Now.”

  • “Try the #1 Project Management Tool for Startups.”

Pro tip: Avoid vague headlines like "The Future of Automation" or “Cutting Edge AI” - they don’t tell users what they’re getting, and everyone is doing.

SaaS hompage copy example

2. Calls to Action (CTAs)

Your CTA is where the money is. Even a small wording change can make a biiiiiig difference. Test:

Different wording

  • “Start Your Free Trial” vs. “Try It Free for 14 Days”

  • “Get Instant Access” vs. “Create Your Account”

Friction-reducing phrases

  • Adding “No credit card required” can boost sign-ups.

  • Removing “Sign up now” and replacing it with “Get started in 60 seconds” can reduce hesitation.

Button design & placement

  • Color (green vs. orange vs. blue).

  • Rounded vs. squared buttons.

  • Placement above the fold vs. after product details.

Pro tip: Test adding social proof near the CTA—like “Join 10,000+ teams using [Your SaaS Name]” - to increase credibility.

3. Product descriptions and feature lists

Your SaaS product description should sell the experience, not just list features. Test:

  • Long-form descriptions with storytelling vs. short, punchy descriptions with bullet points.

  • Feature-heavy messaging like “AI-powered automation” vs. benefit-driven messaging like “Save 10+ hours a week with AI-powered automation.”

  • Language that mirrors how customers describe the product in reviews vs. technical descriptions.

Pro tip: Instead of listing features like “AI-powered automation,” explain the impact with something like “Save 10+ hours a week with AI-powered automation.”

SaaS product descriptions and features copy example

4. Pricing page copy

Pricing pages are high-friction zones. Even small copy changes can influence conversion rates. Test:

  • Revealing pricing upfront vs. requiring users to request a quote.

  • “Starting at $X/month” vs. emphasizing savings with “Save 20% with annual billing.”

  • Adding risk-reducing phrases like “Cancel anytime” or “100% money-back guarantee” to reduce hesitation.

Pro tip: Adding customer testimonials next to pricing tiers can help build trust.

example of saas pricing page copy


5. Social proof placement

Testimonials, case studies, and customer reviews increase trust, but where you place them matters. Test:

  • Placing testimonials near CTAs vs. at the bottom of the page. Many users decide before scrolling, so social proof above the fold can improve conversions.

  • Short testimonials vs. in-depth case studies. Quick quotes work well for landing pages, but long-form case studies might convert better on pricing pages.

  • Customer logos vs. detailed success metrics. “Used by Slack, Shopify, and HubSpot” vs. “Customers see a 47% increase in team efficiency.”

Pro tip: Test video testimonials vs. text reviews since video often converts better.

social proof example on saas website



How to analyze A/B test results (without fooling yourself)

Running A/B tests is one thing. Understanding what the results actually mean is another. Here’s how to avoid misleading yourself.

1. Make sure your results are statistically significant

Just because Version B got more clicks doesn’t mean it’s actually better. It could just be random chance.

  • Use an A/B testing calculator (like Google Optimize or VWO) to check if your results are legit.

  • Aim for at least 95% statistical confidence before making decisions.

2. Watch out for false positives

Sometimes, one version wins simply because of external factors (seasonality, ad traffic changes, algorithm shifts). To avoid this:

  • Run tests for at least two full sales cycles to even out fluctuations.

  • Get at least 1,000–2,000 visitors before deciding on a winner.

3. Optimize for the right metrics

Clicks are nice, but they don’t always equal revenue. Make sure your A/B test goals match your business objectives.

Good metrics to track:

  • Free trial sign-ups

  • Demo bookings

  • Paid conversions

Bad metrics to obsess over:

  • Pageviews

  • Time on page

  • Bounce rate (unless it’s crazy high)

Next-level A/B testing strategies

Now that you’ve got the basics down, let’s kick it up a notch.

1. Multivariate testing

A/B tests compare one thing at a time. But multivariate tests let you test multiple variables together.

Example: Instead of just testing the headline, you test:

  • Headline + CTA wording

  • Headline + CTA placement + social proof

This works best on high-traffic pages where you can collect enough data quickly.

2. Personalization-based A/B testing

Personalization-based A/B testing lets you serve different versions of your copy to different audience segments based on who they are, where they’re coming from, and how they’ve interacted with your site before. This type of testing goes beyond simple A/B comparisons by dynamically adjusting messaging to match the user’s needs, intent, or expectations.

Why does this matter? Personalized experiences drive higher engagement and conversions. In fact:

  • 91% of consumers say they are more likely to shop with brands that provide relevant recommendations and offers (Accenture).

  • Personalized CTAs convert 202% better than generic ones (HubSpot).

  • Websites that implement dynamic, behavior-driven content see an average 20% increase in sales (Monetate).

Instead of testing a single piece of copy for all visitors, personalization-based A/B testing allows you to refine your copy for specific types of visitors and see what resonates best with each group.

Here’s how you can apply personalization-based A/B testing to your SaaS copy.

3. Personalizing based on user behavior

New visitors and returning users have completely different mindsets when they land on your site.

  • New visitors don’t know much about your product yet. They need clear, benefit-driven messaging that builds trust and explains your unique value proposition (UVP).

  • Returning visitors have already seen your site before—maybe they read a blog, checked out pricing, or signed up for a free trial but didn’t convert. They might need urgency-based copy, testimonials, or a compelling offer to push them toward signing up.

Example A/B test: Homepage headline for new vs. returning users

Version A (new visitors): “The fastest way to automate your marketing-no coding required”
Version B (returning visitors): “Welcome back! Ready to take the next step? Get 20% off your first month”

How to test this:

  • Use tools like Optimizely, Google Optimize, or VWO to detect if a visitor is new or returning and serve them different copy accordingly.

  • Measure the impact on bounce rate, time on page, and conversion rate to see if personalized messaging improves engagement.

4. Personalizing based on location (geo-targeted messaging)

Where your visitors are located can have a huge impact on what messaging resonates with them.

  • Pricing expectations vary by region—offering localized pricing can increase conversions.

  • Cultural differences can make certain phrases, offers, or CTAs more effective in one country but not in another.

  • Local regulations and compliance may require different messaging for GDPR in Europe vs. CCPA in the U.S.

Example A/B test: Geo-specific pricing page copy

Version A (U.S. visitors): “Start your free 14-day trial today—cancel anytime.”
Version B (EU visitors): “Start your free 14-day trial—no credit card required & GDPR-compliant.”

Example A/B test: Localized social proof

Version A (generic testimonial): “Loved by thousands of businesses worldwide.”
Version B (localized testimonial for UK visitors): “Loved by 2,000+ UK businesses, including [Local UK SaaS Company].”

How to test this:

  • Use IP-based geo-targeting with tools like VWO, Google Optimize, or HubSpot Smart Content to display different copy based on a visitor’s country or region.

  • Track conversion rate by location to see if localized copy leads to better engagement.

5. Personalizing based on lead source

Where a user came from affects what they expect to see when they land on your site. A user arriving from a Google ad, an email campaign, or an organic search result all have different levels of intent and familiarity with your brand.

  • Ad traffic users have likely seen a specific promise in the ad—your landing page should match that message exactly.

  • Organic search visitors might be in research mode, so they need educational content before they’re ready to buy.

  • Referral traffic (users coming from another site) might already trust your product more than a cold lead, so social proof and testimonials could help seal the deal.

Example A/B test: Tailored landing page copy based on ad campaigns

Version A (visitors from a paid search ad):

Headline: “Rank #1 on Google in 30 days—try our SEO tool for free”
CTA: “Start your free trial”

Version B (visitors from an organic blog post about SEO):

Headline: “SEO made simple—a beginner’s guide to ranking higher”
CTA: “Read the full guide”

If someone clicks on an SEO software ad promising fast rankings, they expect a direct offer when they land. But if someone finds your site through a blog post, they might not be ready to buy yet—so pushing them into a softer CTA like reading a case study might work better.

How to test this:

  • Use UTM tracking and dynamic content tools like Unbounce, Instapage, or HubSpot to personalize landing pages based on traffic source.

  • Compare bounce rates, time on page, and conversion rates between the different variations.

How to run a personalization-based A/B test without messing it up

  • Segment your traffic properly by making sure your personalization tool is detecting users accurately before testing different copy.

  • Test on high-traffic pages first. Personalization needs enough visitors per variation to generate statistically significant results.

  • Keep the core message consistent because if you change copy too drastically between segments, it might confuse users who revisit from a different source.

  • Don’t over-do it with too much personalization (like showing someone their name before they’ve signed up. It can feel creepy and backfire.

  • A/B tests need enough traffic and time to produce statistically significant results. A good rule of thumb is to run a test for at least two full sales cycles or until you reach 1,000–2,000 visitors per variation. Stopping a test too early can lead to misleading results. Always aim for 95% statistical confidence before choosing a winner.

  • If you’re starting from scratch, headlines and CTAs usually have the biggest impact on conversions. A compelling headline determines whether visitors keep reading, while a strong CTA influences whether they take action. Once you’ve optimized these, move on to pricing page copy, product descriptions, and social proof placement.

  • If neither version significantly outperforms the other, there are a few things you can do:

    • Extend the test duration to collect more data.

    • Re-evaluate whether the change was too minor to make an impact.

    • Try testing a bigger contrast—for example, completely rewording a CTA rather than just tweaking one phrase.

    • Analyze secondary metrics like scroll depth, time on page, or click-through rate to see if one version engaged users more.

  • Yes, but be careful. You can run multiple tests on different pages (e.g., testing a CTA on your homepage and a headline on your pricing page). However, avoid running multiple tests on the same page simultaneously, as overlapping experiments can interfere with results and make it harder to pinpoint what’s driving changes in user behavior.

  • Clicks are great, but they don’t always lead to sales. Instead of focusing only on CTR, track conversion-driven KPIs like:

    • Free trial sign-ups

    • Demo requests

    • Paid plan upgrades

    • Customer lifetime value (LTV)

    If an A/B test improves clicks but doesn’t increase conversions, it might attract lower-quality traffic or create a misleading expectation. Always align your tests with your business goals.

Phoebe Lown

Phoebe is a freelance copywriter and content strategist. With a decade of experience in SaaS scale-ups, Phoebe specializes in UX and web copy and has worked with several household brands to help breathe life into their stories.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/phoebelown/
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